A Dark Angel Network cartoon

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before normal comes with his "bip bip", maybe OC max, and another can speak about "so the fox want stop us? really?? are you sure of that?"
"yeah oc, an indicator to logan has tell him that" Or something like this... .

And why not a streaming of eyes only at this moment, speaking about that ?
We make eyes only tell the necessary, and before the end, normal comes, "bip bip, need everybody for special delivery.....". And they comes... .

Maybe it's better to permit to eyes only to termine, because in the real show, no one messenger will go to work before the end of the streaming, but i think if normal interrupts eyes only, it look like more dynamics... .

what do you think about that ?

I think it's correct because with a discussion between caracter, a streaming, a fight with fox agents, and a curse for jampony, we have the most part of things in the show... .

Maybe we can find a way for showing max steal something, or with a love-diner, and she's interrupt for help his friend for the delivery.... . I don't know, ideas come by so differents ways... .

bye!

[gtf_dean_fenech]

about the script i'll try to write something soon.

about the eyes only broadcast. I was thinking that at the end eyesonly says something about "all thos letters you recieved is about BCD and DAN... FOX beware" or something like that, but its shown at the end not at the begining.

[rantanplan]

mmm ok... .

It will be like if letter come to eyes only, so ?

i was imagine that at the end, we see somebody receive the letter, and see what he read... .

But we can do too show logan receive the letter and do a broadcast (again one time, it was maybe your first idea lol).

bye!

[gtf_dean_fenech]

when the jam pony gang are passing out the letters or flyers or whatever we can do a short of music montage of different people from jam pony passing the letters or flyers to other chareters from the show, like we show alec on a window ledge of the police station and then we show Matt Sung reading it, or Sketchy giving a letter to the bar man at Crash or to Lydeker who is drinking a glass of water, or someone giving a letter to Sebatian and we can make it funny if a robotic arm comes out of his wheel chair and taking the letter like this -> http://img193.imagevenue.com/img.php?im ... _466lo.JPG , or Zack is talking on a pay phone and then O.C. gives him a letter, he drops the phone, the phone is still hanging there and we see Zack and O.C. running away and then we hear someone on the phone going "zack... hello...?" or Logan is writing on his computer, then a the letter falls on his keyboard and he looks up and Max is smiling at him leaning on the computer. Things and short funny situations like these. then all this leads to the fight, DA characters are victorious over the evil special FOX agents. Then we bring the eyesonly broadcast

this is my idea so far.

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